ENGL 147N Week 7 Discussion: Revision Plan (Summer 2020)
- Read/review the following resources for this activity:
- Textbook: pp. 104-115, 303-305 Lesson
- Minimum of 1 scholarly source
Apply the following writing resources to your posts:
- Link (multimedia presentation):
- Citing References in Text (Links to an external site.) Link (website):
- APA Citation and Writing (Links to an external site.)
Initial Post Instructions
Part 1: Research & Review
Read and review our required reading and lesson on revision, editing, and proofing, as well as your returned rubric and feedback from your instructor.
Name: Jennifer Lucas
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Part 2: Application
Prior to beginning work on this reflection, refer to the feedback you have been given by your instructor and peers over the past weeks plus any additional experiences you have with the writing process covered in the course. Reflection is an important part of the writing process. Examine how the writing process has been going for you with your essay up to this point.
Then, explain the results of your paper review with your peers. Detail the 3 most significant issues found in your draft feedback, placing them in the order of importance (the basis for a revision plan of action). As you write, be specific in which areas you are referring to, such as the introduction, claim, counterargument, etc., and how it relates to your experience with the writing process. Research ways to correct the problem, in our textbook and lesson, library writing references, or external sources.
Provide an example of at least one corrected based on these resources. Cite your sources in APA format. Follow-Up Post Instructions Respond to at least two peers or one peer and the instructor. Compare your peers’ results to your own and share resources for improvement. Did your instructor find similar issues? Which revision and editing approaches work best for you?